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ext_975 ([identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] propinquitine 2009-03-03 03:32 am (UTC)

lovely fic! I really liked how panicked and afraid John was about going blind, and how supportive his Team was. The scene with them walking down the hall, all wearing yellow for John to see them, was awesome. Showing Rodney & Jennifer getting along after an amicable breakup was really well-done--I liked that nobody was the bad guy, they just weren't meant to be. I also liked how family-like you depicted the relationships among senior staff, especially in that scene with all of them eating brunch together, and Torren going from lap to lap. I liked that they all had relationships of different kinds with each other--that touch about Ronon going to hang out with Woolsey was inspired!

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