ext_3674: pete wisdom says, "Gotta love those happy endings." (ridiculous fangirling)
the four-stanza mile ([identity profile] iambickilometer.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] propinquitine 2009-03-02 10:16 pm (UTC)

Oh, wow, you just - this took the challenge and just ran with it. It was gorgeous, and I loved how well you described what John was seeing. Such an original idea. I agree with Lorne and the assembled masses; I think I'd like this kind of experience. So long as it was temporary, of course. I loved the team interaction we got, the characterisations of even the more minor characters. I loved the details, like Radek having knit Torren a sweater. And Lorne's artistic inclinations! I haven't seen that in fic before, and I like it. :D

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